Honest opinions please...? - vortex boat
I kiss you on the brain in the shadow of the train
There we were in the rain. Water Rail against my brain. My shirt was yellow and her face was obvious. Popcorn is like a shooting star. Tomorrow and today seems far away. What seems to be cute and unusual goes here. The swirl of black blood round. Life is fun, but death is not fair. The spark in my eyes means I want ice cream. Row, Row Your Boat. Life was just a dream. I made my bed on the trampoline. In your words mean really tired. Keep your head, not on the trigger. I understand that life is sour. I love you when it arrives. Close your eyes and listen to the splashing of rain. My shoes were dirty, and gathered his head in his five senses. The water tastes like pickle juice in Spain. There we were in the rain.
Thursday, January 21, 2010
Vortex Boat Honest Opinions Please...?
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Rain that creating interesting! Sensual, desperate, like love. Thumbs up!
wow .. very, very important. In impressed.
Hello Excellent Keep it up:)
Well written.
You have a gift with words.
the kiss in my head makes me crazy.
and on through the rain
Very good and very interesting. I like it.
Well done!
Very good and very interesting. I like it.
Well done!
This is very, very nice. Very well written.
.... hmmmm who has potential, but some lines do not appear on the right word that you try, people also feel ... seems a little nervous and some are good ... others less so. In general, very good: o)
.... hmmmm who has potential, but some lines do not appear on the right word that you try, people also feel ... seems a little nervous and some are good ... others less so. In general, very good: o)
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